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Martin Garcia's avatar

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Hope you are doing well Jeffrey!

Jeffrey Salem's avatar

Thank you thank you. I am doing well. I hope you are too.

Mike smith's avatar

This is so good! I'm writing a poem with a similar theme but I've never been able to crack the angle of approach. It's nice to see that it can be done.

Jeffrey Salem's avatar

Thank you thank you. Good luck with your poem as well!

Olly von's avatar

Your writing is so deep and such a joy to read, those final two stanzas are perfect

Jeffrey Salem's avatar

I'm glad that you are finding depth and enjoyment in my poems. A lot has happened to me in the past year, and especially in the past month. I'm greatful that something useful has come from all of it.

Olly von's avatar

I hope things start looking up Jeffrey. When things are hard for me I remember that nothing lasts forever no bad feelings no situation no uncomfortable moment they all eventually pass.

Jeffrey Salem's avatar

I should have been clearer, the things happening in the past year were bad, the things in the past months were big, but good. So, I think this could still turn out to be a really good year. I'm on the right road. For sure.

Olly von's avatar

Oh good I’m glad it’s for the better!